I love the way you do the lines, very expressive and yet there's a lovely sense of mass and weight. Your anatomy is so good! I like how he looks like a fighter but still is such a bish~ |3 You have no idea how much I've been wanting to see more of your work/style~ <3
I like that he's got that black-white-opposite thing going on with the lanterns and his armbands, but I think the sleeves might be a bit much....? Or the stripes (though I know that trim said she liked the combination of stripes and drapery). I-it just seems like it'd be a bit of a pain to deal with his lantern-weapon while his sleeves fall down and floosh all around.
This might sound funny too, but since he's pretty symmetrical, the asymmetry of his waist cloth really stands out and his hair is pulled on the same side, so it's kind of 'heavy'...? I'd love if you push the 'balance' theme you've got going a bit more. :D
Thanks you guys~ (this is weird responding to my own post;;) I wasn't particularly happy with his bottom half, specifically pants/footwear.
I agree with the sleeves presenting a fire hazard with the lanterns, I'll take that and the balance into consideration for the final. And add accessories.. maybe earrings or bondage, teehee~
Y-yeah, I know what you mean, I'm not sure how the comment-response system is supposed to work on this thing (I-I'm just weird and check comments a lot s-so I'mma gonna respond again ;;; )
|D When I saw his shoes, all I could think was "Ooo, Naruto" ;;; I still love him though~
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eheee he's cute! ///
Maybe you could add accessories, or trimming on the pants/cloth...? Ionno, it looks good though :O What part isn't working for you?
I love the way you do the lines, very expressive and yet there's a lovely sense of mass and weight. Your anatomy is so good! I like how he looks like a fighter but still is such a bish~ |3 You have no idea how much I've been wanting to see more of your work/style~ <3
I like that he's got that black-white-opposite thing going on with the lanterns and his armbands, but I think the sleeves might be a bit much....? Or the stripes (though I know that trim said she liked the combination of stripes and drapery). I-it just seems like it'd be a bit of a pain to deal with his lantern-weapon while his sleeves fall down and floosh all around.
This might sound funny too, but since he's pretty symmetrical, the asymmetry of his waist cloth really stands out and his hair is pulled on the same side, so it's kind of 'heavy'...? I'd love if you push the 'balance' theme you've got going a bit more. :D
Thanks you guys~
(this is weird responding to my own post;;) I wasn't particularly happy with his bottom half, specifically pants/footwear.
I agree with the sleeves presenting a fire hazard with the lanterns, I'll take that and the balance into consideration for the final. And add accessories.. maybe earrings or bondage, teehee~
Y-yeah, I know what you mean, I'm not sure how the comment-response system is supposed to work on this thing (I-I'm just weird and check comments a lot s-so I'mma gonna respond again ;;; )
|D When I saw his shoes, all I could think was "Ooo, Naruto" ;;; I still love him though~
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Wow! Your linework is so wonderful. You can feel the expression and power in it--- *A*
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